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Post by labaen on Sept 27, 2012 16:24:58 GMT -8
The Fear
It is the fear that hinders me, It is the thought of going back to being like I once was, I was lost before you walked into my life, I was all alone with no direction, Now I have lost you and I find myself at a crossroads, What should I do now without your touch, There are no smiles left to be had, The party has now long ended, If only there were a way to bring back the magic, I can't be sure how it is all my fault, But I am sure that it is, Love is a word not to be taken lightly, Now that you are gone I have plunged into darkness, There is no cure for my sickness, I have now decided to accept my fate, My heart bleeds vocally with whispers of your name, I must wander this world such as the spirits do, Never ceasing in my journey for your smile, Do I understand all that has happened, Surely I do not, The world was once a bright place to live, Now all I wish to do is leave it, My sickness has began to take me, Surely I will die, It is the fear that holds me.
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Post by Bleeding Quill on Sept 29, 2012 15:03:07 GMT -8
WOW I loved the emotions and how you made me feel the pain. The title fits well the layout is good.
Thank you for sharing I hope to read more from you.
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Post by labaen on Nov 14, 2012 14:43:18 GMT -8
thank you very much for your kind words. I'm very sorry I haven't responded sooner. My job has become very demanding as of late.
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Post by Bleeding Quill on Nov 18, 2012 18:22:52 GMT -8
That is okay I can understand and no problem I liked your poem very much.
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